Although your mind, may overload
That you may think, it will explode
With all the thoughts, that do torment
Since Sal was in, the accident
I know no words, can take away
The stress this brings, to you each day
But this I hope, within this rhyme
That you will find, a little time
When you can see, that many here
Now pray for Sal, and share the fear
So give yourself, some time for you
And let us bear, that load you do
So you can gain, the peace of mind
That in a problem shared can find
For that will help when you are thrown
To bear that you must do alone
To visit Sal we cannot get
To take him for that cigarette
So you do that and leave the prayers
To those of us who share your cares
In a list
A contest entry
- Caring Thoughts For catz by -LilacThOughts-.
1000 points, ended April 4, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Emotive...
Thank you for this uplifting write for catz and Sal...we never know what's round the corner and it helps to know you are not alone...
You have shown kindness and heartfelt thoughts, which all helps towards the healing process, to know that you have friends pulling for you, means a lot in deed...a lovely piece in rhymeful beat, thank you on behalf of catz
~Lilac~
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Thank you very much for your entry, it is a welcomed contribution to the contest...
Comments will be given at the time of judging...
~Lilac~ -
Awww, thanks again, broad and fair
You're so thoughtful to write yet another lovely poem to help us through this challenge in our lives.
Dee
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I truely enjoyed this write with its great flow and imagery. Thank you so much for sharing this.
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