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Siena's Lament

A whisper in my heart
as I watch the wind fading
and the sakura blossoms sway in its touch
A quiet feeling arises
of something that once has been
that could be again
if I only sat still for an eternity
there's a feeling rising within me
that I just can't turn into words
watching the white silken petals drift lazily away
on the warm current of air
a bride blossoms from what never was
I might have been
I could have been
and steel crushes blossom in pain

Author notes

probably as close to a love poem as Siena gets

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  • Siby Anan
    August 22, 2007
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    Whoa...this is really sad >.< The words you use to describe everything seem to be...perfect...


  • Sinned Alchemist
    April 15, 2007
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    its kinda sad.like all laments are i guess.very good though


  • Artemis Gem
    March 21, 2007

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    watching the white silken petals drift lazily away
    on the warm current of air
    a bride blossoms from what never was
    I might have been
    I could have been
    and steel crushes blossom in pain


    awwwww poor siena sensei!
    megumi: *cries* the things we kunoichi go through! stupid duty! *throws ninja headband against wall*
    Yuuki: *restrains her teammate* Baka!How dare you! What a disgrace to Konoha!
    Megumi: Well-its true~ We have no lives, courtesy of being shinobi!
    Aya: well, its becomeour life...
    yuuki: I don't mind
    Megumi: Well-I do!
    Aya: *snickers* you arent that good, so it doesnt matter-
    megumi; NANDISTE?!?! *tackles aya*