If only I could
soar around the moon,
visit Venus and Mars-
maybe even be part
of discovering a new world.
My dreams are where I fly free
seeking what my heart sees,
not a stone left unturned-
or a road untaken,
I challenge all of me.
(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson
March 20th,2007
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ABC
A contest entry
- TEN CONTESTS In One, Something For Everone by earthstar.
600 points, ended April 3, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very good!
this is very good! thank you for entering -
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Carly..
Thank you so much ! Have a blessed night. Debby
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i would love to visit another planet. maybe then i could find where i belong. thank you for sharing this, you made me smile and giggle. good luck in this contest you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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Very Sweet.
it up lifts the soul and brings a smle to the heart. If we could be as free as our dreams. To Discover a new world in our own soul would be great. It carried a tune of a loving free spirt. Who enjoys life to the fullest.
Very short direct and effective from start to finsh.Great job. Thank you for enterin my contest. I hope you have a great job. Wonderful from start to finsh. -
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Thank you so much ! I truly enjoyed writing this..Thank you for having this contest. Blessings to you. Debby
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an wonderful humanitian that the world definitely needs more of!!!!!
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Oh how sweet.. thank you !!!!
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IMPRESSIVE !
This is very impressive and I really did enjoy it, I plan to read it again and again. I thank you for sharing it with me and I wish you success in your challenge...
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Thank you very much Darryl !! I really appreciate you reading my work and your support. God bless. Debby
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