I love you so much to let you go
I love you to much to let people know
I feel scarer with out you
And when I'm with you i feel safe
Even though people say it's a mistake
I can't stop thinking about you
Every hour of the day
Every day of the week
I just need to know if your okay
Because right now i am so weak
I will always remember
When we were holding hands in the sand
Just talking lying down as i rest my eyes
Listening to the steady beat of your heart
Saying you love me
And we'll never be seen apart
Now everyday i cry
Because he left me alone and cold
Holding his picture in my hand
As i walk through the soft smooth sand
Then a hand grabed my hand
And in the same sweet soft voice
As i turned around
He said I'm sorry and i love you.
Please tell me what you think
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wow this is a really good poem -
This is so sweet, This part makes me think of my current relationship...:
Even though people say it's a mistake
I can't stop thinking about you
Every hour of the day
Every day of the week
I just need to know if your okay
Great Job, but you have a few typo's you really should fix..
~*~ Mystic
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