I am lord of hell
And you are now all
My slaves, bow down
And kiss the ashes
Of my doomed kingdom,
My queen comes to me
Slave prepare the blood
Bath bring me my staff
And the cloak of angel
Feathers, set the dinner table
She love the flesh of
Children, she comes the night
Becomes darker and hell as come
To clam the land of mortals,
The freedom no longer as breath, for
I lord of darkness bow down and live or die
A thousand deaths of endless pain {laughs with death cold stare}
The door slams open the queen of the damned is here.
A contest entry
- In A Mind Of Darkniss by Myth Of Twilight.
890 points, ended June 5, 2007, 46 entries
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you love me or hate me, like me dispise me. I DONT CARE lmao..i am me and i am who i am.This was a great piece you penned best wishes toyou poet.
Tory -
I bow to no king, for I am me. You however can bow to me, as I have been to Hell and walked free.
Now get down on your bended knee and speak softly, to me your Queen.
LOL
RIftkin -
I like how this began as the king controlling hell, then ends as the queen is the ruler, Great write.
~Oka/KC -
Interesting
This piece was a little gem since it had a lot of believablity factor and as well I felt compell to obey the Lord while enduring unimaginable situation.
-Keep the ink flowing!
-Sage of the east -
Oh, so darkly DARK!
Making me run away and hide under the covers... for reals!
So oh my gosh cool! 
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a pure fire style i loved how you put this together gret work and thank you for entering goo luck
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hypmatising i think the word for this piece is
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The first line is great! "I am the Lord of Hell" it's kinda ominous sounding...I love it and it is very dark. Great job!
<3 Jenerali -
great poem
this was a short but staight and great poem it was cool and very dark i love dark poems you are a great poet keep up the good work thanks for sharing and God Bless Your friend dianna
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how come uuuu get to me ruler of the underworld...THATS NOT FAIR!!!
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good luck with your dark kingdom
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