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*I........*

I cut to survive

I cut to know I'm alive

I cut to have me bleed

I cut to hear my final scream

I pop a pil

To make me ill

I pop a pill

So i can kill.

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  • missin-my-Marine
    March 30, 2007

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    pretty good

    pretty good like the one b4 me not your best but i dont think its your worst either.
    i know the feeling of wanteing to die, to feel the pain, to wanna pop a pill, its not a good feeling.
    good write.


  • Kristin Melissa
    March 22, 2007

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    Truthfully, this isn't one of yoour better poems, I know the feeling of wanting to cut but still not the best...
    ~*~ Mystic