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Moving On

There comes a time
in everyones life
where you have to move on
and forget about the strife
There comes a time
when you grow up
you dont see it coming
and then you're stuck
you try and try
to get out of the rut
but you end up losing
then acting like a slut
to dull the pain
no hope to gain
then it happens
you move on
and you know what
you're all right

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 21, 2007
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    i like this poem and the kind of message it holds, you did a great job on this, keep it flowing