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Dilemma: Words of the Heart-breaker

So if I,

saw your face

and you saw me passing by,

would you,

come to me

or would you turn and close your eyes?

Am I really,

causing you so much pain?

Then maybe,

we could try all this again.

Hey, you know I just want

to get to know you a little better.

Then, maybe

we could sometime get together.

So now we,

could start over again,

again and again,

if you want to,

I'm waiting, it's your move.

Yeah, I know I messed up

it's not the first time.

can't seem to back away,

away from your life.

Just want to talk to you

to make all this right.

I know I broke your heart,

but just give me try.

Hey, you know I just want

to get to know you a little better.

Then, maybe

we could sometime get together.

So now we,

could start over again,

and again and again,

if you want to,

I'm waiting, its your move.

I see your face

and you turn away

you won't tell me why

you tell me

just go away,

that I've crossed te line.

If thats really

what you want,

then I'll just go away.

I'll fly away

and come back when

you're ready for me to stay.

Hey, you know I

never meant to hurt you.

Then, maybe

you could sit with me and listen.

I just want to start

over again, over again.

Can't you see,

I just want to be friends.

Yeah, just want to be your friend.

Oh yeah, just trying to be your friend.

And now, maybe,

we try this over again.

I know I broke your heart,

but all I want is

another chance...

trust me, this time,

I promise...

Author notes

This is only half of a two part story. its a song that gives the point of view of someone who has broken the heart of a loved one. "Dilemma: Words of the Heart-broken" gives the point of view of the one whos heart has been broken. This song is the point of view of the heart-breaker.

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Searching for that Inspiration by yumesandman. 390 points, ended April 2, 2007, 4 entries
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yumesandman
April 2, 2007
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I like it.

The one thing is that without the song list in front of me, I can't really pick out which song this was meant to go with. But still, the poem is very nicely written and the tone of it is very very strong. Over all I think you did a very nice job.
s0ulmusician
March 27, 2007

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I like this a lot. It's a very smooth and honest piece. The pleading is evident with the words you've crafted. I think it's something that a lot of people can relate to. Oh, good luck in the contest!