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It's all been said . . .

So, It's all been said before
'Tis the stuff of legend and lore
We commit
We submit
And even fit
Sweetest words to open her door.

Well, not this time my loving rhyme
For girl you are my peace, sublime
I state now
I state how
And even vow
I'll love you past the death of time.

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  • elemental angel
    March 21, 2007
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    Beautiful

    So much love in your words.
    Bravo


  • light to a dreamer gold member
    March 21, 2007

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    You Show Love

    Your words show a man thats had so much hurt and still loving that gives hope to all another good write.


  • Ice queen 17
    March 20, 2007
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    great job i love this good luck thnks 4 entering