oh dutiful, for lazy guys,
forever waves of blame,
for purple sweater's tapestry,
with someone's fruity stain,
insecticide and fluoride,
oh how the time does flee,
write lists, do chores, and then complete
an endless shopping spree!
Author notes
parody of america the beautiful... obviously... hope ya like it ;]
A contest entry
- ~For Women Only~ by Nature Song.
525 points, ended March 25, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Creative and unique. I loved this parody.
"oh dutiful, for lazy guys,
forever waves of blame"
Nothing is ever anyone's fault!
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hey i am tina i really loved reading this poem keep up the good work and keep on writting and i am interested on reading more of your poems if you want to take a look at my poems please take a chance to look for at tina12345
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Hmmm...ok, a parody of our Nathional Anthem! Interesting! Good luck in the conest! ~Sie
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yeah, i sang it as i read it, the first line was an awesome clue to the song. this is very true, and creative. thanks for your entry.
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a very beautiful, the words sing of your thoughts
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