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Goodbye

Rainbow flavored kisses
Fill me up with hope.
Sunshine my heart misses.
Crying all alone.

Simple tears,
upon my cheeks,
broekn years,
of loving thee.

The stars so bright,
the pain it burns,
all on my life,
will i ever learn.

Inside my heart,
is made of glass ,
so torn apart,
im fading fast.

The forsaken sky,
i long to see,
but love is blind,
i can not breathe.

Goodbye to love,
for get this life,
Let this broken dove,
fly.
fly
high.

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  • DareU2Byourself
    March 21, 2007

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    Nicely done. I like how it's a quick read, but it's filled with meaning. You chose words wonderfully. Great job. Thanks for sharing.