I knew I loved you
Before we met
Most people don't believe
In the Internet
The first day I cursed you
And the second we were friends
The third we were close
And this is where a true love story begins
You helped me heal a broken heart
I helped you get over her
And as our friendship grew
That is how our love occurred
Over the months
We held each close
And even though sometimes
We were even "nose to nose"
We didn't agree on some things
But together we got through
And the day came when
We said our I love you's
The months seemed so long
And some of them seemed cursed
But the weeks before I touched you
They were the worst
Longing beyond control
Deep anticipation
One hour seemed like forever
Feelings of concentration
Spending three months with you
Living in my bed
Then the separation
And soon we are to wed
Here we are again
Waiting for the moments to pass
Longing to hold each other close again
It's like constipation with so much built up gas
So soon my love you'll hold me close
And tell me you love me
And soon I'll wear your wedding band
And together, hopefully we'll soon make us two three
A contest entry
- The Way We Met by EmeraldDreams.
450 points, ended April 3, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - im baaack!!! by nobodys-girl.
500 points, ended April 8, 2007, 22 entries
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FANtastic
Wurdplay on Love play then a new form of finding New Love!
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internet love...been there...though i'm really glad it worked out for you! awesome poem, good luck and thankyou so much for entering!
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A sweet story of Love.That flowed really well.A beautiful heartfelt piece you have penned here.Love in a pure form.Hope all is good in your life.
Good Luck to you in your contest
Blessings
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This is a wonderful piece you did on how the two of you met. True love happens when you least expect it. I wish you the very best in life and love. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. It sounds golden. Love and God bless, Joyce
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My friend met her love on the Net, too. Good to know that it does work, seeing as that I'm scared for her when she meets him.
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Very sweet indeed! We are biased of course, but we believe meeting on the internet is an awesome way to do it! Thinking about it, I know a lot of couples, and the ones who met through random dating agencies, or the internet are the happiest ones, and the ones who have been together the longest! Good luck with your future wedding and the patter of ickle teeny weeny feet! Thankyou for the entry.
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