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to him

I've realized that he cares for me
I see this and i'm touched by the kindness of his heart
Even though all of this
After all I put him through he still wanted me
But in my heart cries to be single once again
and i conjure up images of him in the future marring someone other than me somebody the God created just for him
That way he won't become bitter about relationships
and in the end it was better for both of us.

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    April 14, 2007

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    Sad

    “Ah unrequited love I remember it well,
    My heart still shows the scars of that
    Emotional hell.”

    I hope you don't mind, but, I kind of restructured the poem so that it flows a bit better, what do you think? I'll not claim any copyrights, it's a gift, if you're interested:

    I have now finally realized that
    He still cares for me
    And I am touched
    That he is still kind hearted,
    Even though after all
    I put him through you see,
    He still wanted me as if we never parted.
    Even though my heart cries out
    To be single once again and
    I see him marring someone
    That God brought into his heart,
    Perhaps it’s better that way
    And I’ m relieved to say,
    He was not bitter when we did part.