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Ben (Senryu)

my Dad's friend is great -
almost 80 in dog years
he still chases balls...

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Written July 4th, 2003

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  • Jer
    May 29, 2004
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    80 is old. He sounds like a fun dog.

    ~Jer


  • Lurie
    October 21, 2003
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    Old dog,
    does old tricks...
    but no new ones.......~Lu

  • Fuzz
    July 7, 2003
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    Lol...thats about it..HAHA..keep up the "funny" work.
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    «:"'~·*-Jenni*.~''':»
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    Edited on Jul 07, 10:54 p.m. because ''.