I loved you the day we met
I'll love you till I die
Though my heart doesn't know it yet
I gave it my last try
Now I have to leave you
You showed me the way
With all the things you didn't do
To make me want to stay
It's a shame our love can't grow
Now that we're apart
I will never get to show
From the bottom of my heart
What a wonderful person you are
And what you meant to me
But the game has gone too far
Now you'll never see
Good-Bye my darling
I know we both will miss
Thanks for never caring
I never got a kiss
Author notes
option 3
A contest entry
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aaaawwww!!! love the last stanza!!!
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awww
This is really sad!!! Im really sorry for what you are going through and i hope you make it through this... Hard times is never fun and it sucks so much.. Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!
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I love this and it's perfect, I have seen to long poems and hun you poem is perfect. ^^
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sorry
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Excellent write. I really enjoyed reading this. I think it could have been more emotional, though. Good luck in my contest.
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"Now that were apart"
I think you meant to say -we're-
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its...sort of juvinile. not that deep.
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Oh love
Tis a dark day when we forget love. seems that you know how to write about it very well. My love poems just do not seem to click. perhaps I just do not know..
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well written
i've been here...it ache's doesn't it?
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Thank You
It makes you wonder why people become part of your life if thier intentions are not true
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that is sad...I never got a kiss...it moves me.
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It moved me too
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no problem. I'm here for ya.
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Your a very cool person CJ
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thanx, glad ya noticed. lol.
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sad...
it's really sad piece..i love it..good luck
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