I remember the day, when you held me tight.
I remember the day that simply rolled into night.
I can easily recall your hand placed on my heart.
I can easily remember we could not be torn apart.
I still see it now, like it was yesterday.
I still feel your heartbeat until this faithful day.
I can still hear your words of love, whispered in my ear.
I can still taste your skin, much like you where still here.
I sit here by my window, feeling the wind blow my tears away.
I sit here wondering what I could have done to make you stay.
I sit here by my window, trying so hard to stop the crying.
As the wind whispers in my ear, what I could have done to prevent you from dying.
I remember the day, when you broke my soul.
I remember the day that stayed simply untold.
I can easily recall when you tore my heart in two.
I can easily remember, the day you stopped being you.
I can see you now for what you really used to be.
I can feel you now, and feel what you stole away from me.
I can hear your words of love, yet see through them your true colours in every way.
I can taste your poisoned love on my lips and see how they tainted me, every day.
It ached my heart, when my lover gave way to the real you that hid within.
My pain was only matched by the realisation that with you I could never win.
I still every so often, feel a stab of pain and I still wonder why.
Why did the person you where go away? Why did you have to die?
Author notes
I suppose whenever you fidn that the love of ur life was implynot who you though he way, you feel like he died. Because you wonder how the guy you shared such good times could break your heart, and you end to wonder if yur lover didnt simply die on the way and got replaced with this cold creature.
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I can empathise with this feeling to a great extent, as I have been through this myself.
Great write, I like it a lot.
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Interesting background to this story. I could see the grief and struggle in your poem of heartbreak. Thank you for the entry
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