Loving boys who just make pain
Leaving cry stains on my bed
He never knows what he wants
He wants her body
And wants my soul
He thinks he’s funny
When he’s not
Why am I lying
When I know he’s hot
I love his jokes
His fucked up humor
A twisted mind that’s full of lies
He’s so messy
An emotional wreck
The type of guy who hates himself
And wants the world to see him
For the fool he tries to be
Like the models in the magazines
The boy whose in between
I want to be there when he’s lonely
Even if he doesn’t show it
I’m his best friend
He’s mine too
But there’s passion
Between us too
I feel like I just want him
Though I know he’ll hurt me so
Maybe love like this is hopeless
If this boy will just give me pain
How will I ever know he’ll change again?
A contest entry
- Confusion by Poetic-Dreamer.
300 points, ended March 25, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - heartbreak hotel ♥ by Captain Obvious.
375 points, ended April 30, 2007, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a really great poem,,the flow and imagery was very well done you have a great talent in poetry
Keep writing and I wish you the best of luck in this contest!!
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thanxs so much!
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this is almost exactly how i feel about my friend. wow. it feels like you read my heart. good luck!- Captain Obvious
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I'm glad someone choose number one. It seems alittle forced in places but I enjoyed it. It really relates to us and what we had. Thank you so much for entering and good luck. This is getting hard to judge.
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This is a lovely poem you wrote, filled with so much emotion dripping from the page as I was reading. In life the ones we fall in love with hurt us with their actions and we can't stop from loving them. A well written poem and best of luck in the contest dear poet
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This reminds me of my last relationship which I ended last year in December. You've expressed emotions that I've been finding difficult to put into words. Kudos to you for that! :-D
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wow! i can totally relate to this... i am friends with a guy and i think that hes someone that i shouldnt be messin with, but i think i love him, and hes just my friend, we're best friends,we've known each other for two years now... and we know that we like each other, we even told each other that we love each other, but we're not ready to get into a relationship yet...yet we do fool around, i mean, we kiss, and hug, but nothing more than that, but sometimes i want so much more, for him to be a part of my life, but i sometimes feel like it could never really work out.
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