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The Joker Strikes Again

Hey folks, got a nickel? Step right up.
Just a nickel for the mechanical gypsy.
Don't be scared, I don't bite hard
Unless you do something I don't like.

So, I'm a teensy bit tempermental
What do you expect from the Clown Prince of Crime?
I'm a rated R clown with cotton candy hair.
Is that a shiver I just saw creeping down your spine?

You ask me why I hate the bat.  I don't.
I hate the bird. That's why I killed him.
I'm allergic to bird dander, it makes me sneeze.
And besides, Batman works better alone.

The Bird-boy's screams were musical to me
As I rained down the flurry of blows that ended him.
It was no coincidence the day he died.
The same day Robin number one left poor old Batsy behind.

But that's all past and this is present.
And speaking of gifts, I've got one for you.
Open the colorful box and BOO!
Take a deep breath and smile your last.

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dander
flurry
musical
rated R
coincidence
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Just a look into the mind of The Batman's greatest foe.

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  • Tabitha-Robin
    April 16, 2007

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    You have done well with this. You fit the words into this poem nicely. I liked it a lot. Thank you for posting it. God bless you and stay in touch I miss hearing from you.

    IN Christ Jesus,

    Tabitha


  • Poplolly
    March 21, 2007
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    well i thought it was very different but still very cool keep it up !


  • deadcolor dreams
    March 20, 2007

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    Hm.... this was way different then what I was expecting. I haven't decided it that's a good thing. I'll tell you this- this stands out, that is for sure.

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