Hey you,
Take your hand out of me!
I am not your puppet!
In a world of marionettes
I reject my strings
I have my own voice
Do not speak for me
Ventriloquism
Just isn't my thing
I am not a Pinochio
I was born a real boy
A contest entry
- Short and Sweet by TheQuietStorm.
425 points, ended April 20, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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bravo! i really enjoyed reading this! you have written an a very good poem! i love the entire i'm not your puppet idea! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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This thing won't let me applaud without writing a comment in this box. I have a headache and don't really feel like trying to critique anything or make suggestions right now, wish I could just applaud, but oh well...I'm just going to babble for a while, then copy and paste this comment into the comment boxes on the other poems of yours I want to applaud. You know I think your poems are awesome, anyway. So, blah, blah, rhythm, blah, rhyme scheme, blahdey blah, imagery. LOL. Kick ass poem
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