She awoke one morning
her heels were rough
her head, it ached
she's in the buff
Mable grabs a gown
prepares some green tea
strange visions appear
and parade like dreams
she remembers things
she feels really cold
she feels as if
she's exposed to the world
an ache in the head
and shoulder
and feet
did she do something
did she compete
she turns on the tv
to drown out the noise
and there on the news
are a couple of boys
"she ran over there"
they said kinda stunned
"she threw off her gown
and off she gunned"
Mable watches
as the new goes on
last night, it seems
a streaker hit town
the cops at the scene
where the woman had danced
led by their dogs
found some old underpants
Mable hit the floor
what could she do
a dozen people saw her
what a hullabaloo
A contest entry
- fun pic inspired! (prewrites allowed if they fit) by honey bear.
600 points, ended March 22, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ha ha. This was funny. Very different, but funny. Great write.
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funny ending
I thought the poem was a good one. Not quite what I usually read, but I loved the ending.
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wow!!! hehe thats class!! gorrrd i wish i could write like that!! keep it up! im entering ur competition, it looks good lol jem xxx
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this very funny write
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lol okay where did this come from, lol i like it and think you did great but man, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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haha, hullabaloo, what a weird word.
I like this, very strange. She went streaking! That's brilliant!
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