In a colorless world
I am living now.
Colorless invisible sorrow
Does surround me
Ghosts of my feelings do follow
Me silently.
And I have come to know
That my sun has set forever
And I know it will not throw
Single ray of light ever.
I'll be in the darkness forever.
A contest entry
- Where Am I (one hour or more) by MuddyKing.
475 points, ended March 21, 2007, 14 entries
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Ah dearest One ...
darkness is a myth. The true Light dwells inside, and can NEVER be wiped out by external darkness. NOT even by darkness of depression, which is often reactive. Nevertheless, your poem is an accute example of how darkness may change the thought patterns of its victimes.
Loved your subtle rhyme.
Myra
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sorrow is colorless and dark at the same time. You allowing me to see where you were in an effective manner. Forever is a long time and darkness inside only grows with each passing day.
well done
peace Muddy -
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