Watch out you know i'm coming,
creeping so slowly,
anxiety slithers in,
your worst nightmare is about to begin.
Running though the halls,
doors and doors but they lead nowhere,
lights are out panic,
you no im here scream manic.
Hide and go seek..
Round the corners twists and bends,
hiding trying to run away,
a knife its all in the fun,
run rabbit run run run.
I'm coming for you and where will you go?
tearstained i see your face,
i'm afraid there's no escape, or gain,
welcome to my world, the twisted game.
Hide and go seek..
Breathing heavy now,
oh times running out,
i'm gonna get you,
weather or not you want me to.
See in my world,
there are no rules,
i'm the hunter, not the hunted,
and to me you are confronted.
Hide and go seek..
Wisper those words to you,
hide and go seek,
i've found you hiding here,
your bitter ending is now my dear.
GAME OVER..
A contest entry
- The Title Is... by zillion.
300 points, ended March 20, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
This was filled with emotion and very tense.
I loved this poem
keep on writing, your really good at it!
xxxxx -
Wow. I really enjoyed reading this- a great write...very intense and full of emotion. Keep it up!
lizz -
Go You!!!!
Amazing twinnie!
I love you hunnie.
And I loved this.
Yours forever.
Kat xXx
-
you never fail to keep it going!!!
i like this one it was well good you can feel it flowing throughout and the tital really works
never fail to impress
louise love ooooooo XXXXXX
-
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! *looks behind*, that was scary a very dark write for you, and still fantastic, the flow is brilliant and it made me feel like i was there being hunted, im scared now lol. well done for a brilliant write though
-
oh this was good, it was better then the movie , it got right to the point, lol, i like this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
-
This reminds me of a Halloween movie. Maybe 1 or 2. I also loved Mike Myers.Very spirited. Never slowed down. You used the title very well. Bravo.
-
Wow freaky, oh the adrenaline rush, wow thats some poem faithless i really like it though. you really capture the point of view of the murderer type person and the scaredness of the victim, thats freaky.
keep writing
kelbornro
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
