1.Pretty in Pinks.(pips)
2.Veggie Racks.
3.Nomads Cafe.
5.Angel Cafe.
6.Pinkerfoods Restaurant.
7.Humble Servings Restaurant.
8.Meñiques HotPlate
9.Veg rosado restuarant
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Some of these really sparked me
The acronym given for, "Pretty in Pink's" is nice because "pip" is a real word for food in itself. Regardless, this name breaks rule #3 because she can't mimic characters.
Wow, I was really surprised with, "Veggie Racks," because my family has shelves with raw goodies placed on them too, so of course I like that one as it matches us! Even items that are cooked still aren't too far off from being original from nature in Pink's community. Thank you for amazing me with that name.
I predict that, "Nomads Cafe" means that you're busily wandering looking for a place to eat, and, then, when you find Pink's, it's enjoyable until you can go home and make your own wonderful snack. She can't do deliveries because that breaks her promise on her name! A different and fun name for sure!
I'm sorry with "Angel Cafe" as my first and third rule doesn't fall for this.
Number six is a cute way of saying 'Healthier Foods Restaurant,' as "PINK" means healthy in the American language. That name is also special to me because you're not bragging that it's the best, just trying to get better. My only suggestion is to maybe capitalize the "f" to make it stand out. Other than that, it's a beautiful logo thought for me.
Oh, "Humble Servings Restaurant" sounds so sweet as it wouldn't be a fast food place but kindly given and the plates brought over would be gentle to the body! The meals cooked would be low-cooked as well as we can't make up our own recipes totally without remembering nature. You were also mild with your time spent to come up with such a brand for my 43-year-old, Pink. Gracias.
Ahh, #8 is representing tinier Mexican Dishes on account of limiting the dose of unhealthy items and that customers may want to try everything. I love that twisted example, except I'd rather you either make that logo all English or all Spanish, not both.
It is interesting how you paired up "Veg" & "rosado" together for a connotation that carrots etcetera will be included as well as it meaning 'natural food by pink' in your 9th name. Again, however, you mixed two languages in one name which could be difficult to read.
My fourth guideline requested that you ask commenters not to use your name. That same principle reminds you to not reply to me or rate it, but you can say something in your author notes to me if you wish.
I echo liking your entry and would be even more delighted if you apply what I requested to be edited.
My criteria was fine in, "Veggie Racks," "Nomads Cafe," "Humble Servings Restaurant" and "Meñiques HotPlate."
My contest is exciting to me,
Daisy / SplishSplashPencil

