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Concentration is The Key

I always seem to think in rhyme.
Sometimes it drives me mad.
As ideas are flooding to my mind,
I grab my writing pad.

Now that part’s not a problem,
when I’m writing it all down.
It’s when I move to my computer,
that my poems bring a frown.

While tapping on the keyboard,
the keys I sometimes miss.
It looks as though my fingers
are getting lycdexis.

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  • deep space
    July 13, 2007
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    very simple and realistic.I like all the facts you have written here,well done and best wishes

  • montez gold member
    June 16, 2007
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    KO!

    Unique and inventive.
    R**
    PS Have the clap!


  • miles of smiles
    June 9, 2007
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    LMPO x10! I love the rhyme- its something I am very envious of! Very very funny- I <3 it!

    -S


  • Blood-Wolf
    April 15, 2007
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    Short snappy and amusing, i know the feeling of this lol very good poem lol made me giggle well don


  • DancingRed
    April 9, 2007

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    Hehehe.
    Awesomeness, a very clever ending. And sadly enough, I can relate, too.
    Thanks for entering.

    DancingRed.


  • burning alive
    April 1, 2007

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    ^^

    Very good. I feel the same way... I've actually been trying to break the habit though. I liked the ending ^^ it was funny. Well, keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.

    -Angel-


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    March 21, 2007

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    I know the feeling that you have
    To speak in rhyme and write...
    One suggestion I may make
    Is hold your tongue just right...
    Keeping it to left of cheek
    May help control your digits...
    And lay off all that choclolate
    So your hands don't get the fidgets!
    bwahahahaha

    Yeah her again!!!


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    March 21, 2007

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    Ha, ha, ha !

    Have you been watching my typing skills? I can totally relate to this one. Great write and good luck in the contest

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