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//Glam-scam//

Livid, morbid
At this funeral-party
Dddirty//pppretty-fucking scene
&&we are falling, it’s just a dream
Creepy, torrid
On your wedding day
Dancing ‘round ((inspiring goreplay))
**♥**
We are meant to bbbe 2gether
This way or nevermore
My candy-coated heart is laid out
Upon the *linoleum* floor
Your brain is dead, this I dread
For we will always want more [and more]
*beatbeatbeat* me
&&*treattreattreat* me
To {cocaine} and ♥ecstasy♥
Let me just
*weepweepweep*
Upon your candied-face
Strewn with dirty-pppretty glam
Was all our love just a ((sscam?))
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  • fallenangel671
    April 11, 2007

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    this was an awesome poem, i loved how you ended it with fix me, i thought that it was a very good emotional drawn write and i enjoyed reading through it, keep writing!!!!

    ~Ashley~<3


  • BArBiE slaPPed m3
    March 22, 2007
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    Awh suga. It was sooo prettiful. Keep on writing


  • Need For Redemption
    March 20, 2007
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    Wow

    Very nice. I love the metephors.


  • KissMeGoodnight
    March 20, 2007
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    AH! I LOVE IT! LOVE IT LOVE IT!! this is so different! you have inspired me!