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~Abandon~

Many many years ago
There's was a little girl
The girl knows everything
About worlds cruelty
Because she has been abandon
From the society and the family
Lost hope
Lost love
No life
You see in her eyes
That's what others say
But it not true
That little girl
Always had hope
Hoping someday her parent
Will come from the blue sky
Hugging and kissing her
Telling her how much they love her
How much they miss her
But that day never come

Now this girl is forty two
Did exactly what her parent did to her
Abandon her kids
Sometime dark in the night
She cry for her kids
Feeling sorry for them to have a mother like her
Every-time she cry
She cut herself
Been doing it for three years

Then one day she see someone
Just like her kids
But they have the kid
In their arms
Laughing and kissing
She watch quietly and peacefully
Wishing she is the kids on their arm
That night she go
Drinking and get her last cut
Knowing she have nothing to miss on this world
Few day later her body show on the News channel
Yet, still no one come to her funeral

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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    May 9, 2008

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    So sad, and true for many. Life never seems to change for the abandoned. It's like, once abandoned, always abandoned. You made a good point in your poem, that this pattern is perpetuated. I know, in part, because my father abandoned me. It is a wound that never heals.

    The Divine is always there, especially for the abandoned. That's where I found my true father.
    It still hurts though; about my bio father.

    Take care, poetess - and I hope to read more of your profoundly raw and moving poetry!


  • perdisbeaute
    April 23, 2007

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    so sad and heart wrenching. It makes me want to cry, feeling her pain. you put a lot of emotions in this, a lot of feelings and depths. A wonderful piece Snow!

    Michelle


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 20, 2007

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    it is hard to think of what to say here, cause i have seen something like this before, it happens alot everywhere sadly, keep it flowing

  • Eusebius
    March 20, 2007

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    bravo

    Ouch! A very dark and very poignant piece...this happens all too often in this harsh and cruel. good job here...bravo...bravo...bravo...