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An Unbroken Blanket

I run my hands through the silk like water
clasping some of it's softess in my hands
I splash it across my warm face
it is cooling as it touches my skin
then I rub the softness of the soap
against my body
purifying my skin
then I plunge into the
darkness of the velvet
I can hear no sound beneath this silk blanket
Everything is calm and still
It is a beautiful place
Then i pull head back up breaking the blanket
what was once my warmth and shelter

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