New
Unlit wick
Difficult to light
Ignites like a woman’s heart
Flame
Wind
Extinguishes the flame of love
Must use a new match
Fresh ardor
Flame
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Mirror Oddquain
The mirror oddquain has a syllable count of: 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 - 1, 7, 5, 3, 1
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Oh la la that reminds me love love love! You are so good!
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I LOVED THIS
I thought that this was STUNNING!!!!!!!!!!!
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I've never heard of this form, yet it seems so effortless in your pen...to use brevity in such a manner is amazing
best wishes
peace Muddy
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ohhh, I missed this one, sorry
too many antihistamines for allergies lately. Seems Diana and i have one other thing in common! ? LOL!
And yeah, I LOVE the message this imparts, always like to see a woman's heart ignited.
Nice, subliminal message imbedded there.
I'll have to try some of these.
dad :0
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Wonderful Poem, Amera! Your imagery was great. I liked the style you used here. This is really good, princess Amera!
Jennifer
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Liked this form you have used here, the flow of the poem and the wonderful message your words give to the reader.
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a very reflective piece , like the development and the message this poem conveys...very good
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Hmmmm. Like a woman's heart.... very revealing... flame goes out, relight flame... sounds simple enough... hope they got another match...
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The levels of love
The first group represents a virgin or a pure spirit. Longing for love or trust.
Implied words:
New
Unlit wick
Difficult to light
Build this idea.
Wind or change; if to strong will blow out the flame.
Extinguishes the flame of love
Must use a new match
Fresh ardor
New match = New approach
Fresh, exciting and new.
The levels of love and the aproach we take speaks to us.
Princess as always wonderful...
Farewell
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the comparison here between love and a candle wick are very clever. i have never seen this form so i can not comment on that but the metaphor is good viyanna rosemarie
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