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Sweet Mumma

get down mumma, coz you are my girl
my whole dang life, my whole dang world
i love you baby you are so much fun
shit yeah baby you are my number one
    you do as i say and never disagree
    sweet bitch, thats the way it should be
    when we have sex, its not push and shove
    no,sweet mumma we make real sweet love
i am your man,and you are my missus
we like to share deep, meaningful kisses
one thing is for certain, our love is true
a love only known by a precious few
    so cum on mumma, help me sing my song
    tis only short, so it won`t take long
    and then, coz we are so young and free
    you can get down babe, and boogie with me
yes sweet mumma we will go to bed
boogie loud enough to wake the dead
then sweet mumma we will do it again
coz honeybunch, you are my girlfriend
    so get down mumma, coz you are girl
    my whole dang life, my whole dang world
    i love you baby, you are so much fun
    shit yeah baby, you are my number one 

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  • Dark Soul Reaper
    October 25, 2007
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    Not bad. It's good. Keep up the good work


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    September 6, 2007

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    This one would be a good Black Eyed Peas track, reminds me of Hey Ma , the one they have already sung? Great write, unique in some ways, but following the theme of the BEP song.


  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 20, 2007
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    Started off great. But, um, "bitch" not feelin' that part. It's kinda degrading this piece. This is a contest for love. And I know any man that's gonna love me isn't going to call me a "bitch", sweet or not. Thanks for the enter though. - cgirl0410