I place my hands against his soft smooth skin
and kiss him passionatly
whilst his hair blows lightly with the wind
I plant a kiss on the side of his kneck
And rub his chest
Wait until the best part we haven't
reached there yet
I lace his skin with cream
and slowly retrieve it with my tongue
My passion tearing me apart at the seams
I find the fruits of love
As I sway my hands across his body
And slowly I smoothly rub
A portrait being portrayed
for the world to see
A beautiful song being played
just for him and me....
But now our secret affair
has gone on too long
Now I must end it
Because it is beginning
to feel wrong
Author notes
I chose option 6 I feel that love and passion is a beautiful thing it makes the world a better place in some respect....
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plant a kiss on the side of his kneck
Is this some kind of code for the inside of a mans thighs?
A combination of knickers/kecks/neck?
Whatever, the rest was quite entertaining pity though that you look to break it off because it may be illegal or taboo; most of the good stuff is nowadays.
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"A portrait being portrayed
for the world to see
A beautiful song being played
just for him and me...."
Those lines just spoke to me. They're so poetic and beautiful!
I really like this piece, though I'm not so sure about the last stanza. It's like the first part is pure harmony, but then it suddenly ends without any explanation. I think you should either add some more, or write a different ending!
Other than that - very nicely written! -
i like it. thanks and good luck
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love it !
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A very sensual write here Cass....
It begs for a continuum....
yet leaves the reader to their imagination...
NEAT.... I love it Cass...
Jeffro
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