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Lake of Forgiveness

I have lost my patience to guard
this crystal lake of Heavens.
Fallen as a victim to be alone
by the mercy of only myself.

My heart has never been held
by shadows for this long,
and it feels I am simply waiting
for the chains to be broken.

If I could throw myself forward
to the cold water of Earth;
could I see my crying reflection
in the hourglass still counting?

Can I stop the time this long day,
to prevent a dreadful evening
from falling dark in my heart?

Maybe that would finally explain
my black wings of loss.

May I still turn my gaze to the sky?

If these bonds were finally broken,
could this angel find a home
from your timeless arms of love
in the depth of this old lake?

© Jay H.
March 20, 2007

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Used option 2 with this poem.

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 20, 2007
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    Great job with the word bank well done all the best in the contest .