- Moms Place
- The Easy Diner
Author notes
do not use my name please.
A contest entry
- Help me finish the project that's in my head. by bird at rose.
450 points, ended April 25, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hello in a bell of time [not many names to review],
Moms Place is a nice selection. I now know you read the contest description enough to know she's a mother of so many kids that she's known for that. The main point is probably that her children'll be learning cooking included. I have to credit this name for being similar to an owner's ID tied to dining! Kindly, I ask if you agree to putting an apostrophe so it doesn't look like it's marked down to only moms that can eat there.
Well, "The easy diner" is a present statement that it won't be that messy or hard to prepare either. I'm glad you went into my contest.
Criteria is ok for both, and "Moms Place" had soft letters but didn't slur because of the smoothness.
Daisy and Pretend Pink.
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