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Eyesofanangel524

E is for the eyes that I see the world through
Y is for the yearning I have begun to feel
E is for the enlightenment my soul is finding
S is for the sons who keep me on my toes
O is for the obstacles I am left to overcome
F is for the family, my children, whom keep me strong
A is for the acceptance I am learning to find
N is for the neverending pain I hide from the world
A is for the angels, my friends who see me through a dark day
N is for the never ending fight that I will embrace 
G is for the girl who lights my eye, my daughter
E is for the essence of my soul be it dark or light
L is for the love that radiates from me to others
524 is the day and month I was placed here explore

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 28, 2007

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    You are all this and so much more. You are a shining star who lights the darkest nights, a shoulder to lean on and to arms to hold one tight, you are love and understanding, strong for all who need it, even when you feel so weak yourself. You are an angel, sent from God above to help so many in need. You are a friend and lover, a soulmate and blessing.
    You are so manythings forever one, when you can not be for yourself.
    You are the true meaning of kindness and more.
    All who meet you are blessed.
    I am so glad to be one of them.
    Excellent job.
    Love to you!

  • Foreverstars
    March 23, 2007

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    This is a great poem you did here to explain your name and it shows your endearing qualities. You have a good sense of values. Good luck in the contest.

  • Heavenly Star
    March 21, 2007

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    This is a lovely acrostic explaining your poet name, well done dear poet and best of luck to you in the contest


  • Spiritvision angel
    March 21, 2007

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    Great! This is a wonderful write you have done and the way you incorporate the name and numbers. I truely like this.


  • Whoochi gold member
    March 20, 2007

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    Very well put together...and glad of 524 for it weren't well we would have never met...love the repeated examples of yur kids...thats about my life too...well done!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 20, 2007

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    Well eyesofanangel524 it is certainly nice to meet you. It sounds as if you have a very full life and a good support system as well. Your life is rich with family and friends. What a blessing that must be for you. Thank you for taking the time and making the effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Grey Mouser
    March 20, 2007

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    D is for the day we first met.
    A is for awesome because you sre.
    W is for wonderful for the freindship and love you give.
    N is for never giving in.

    All of those things and more do you encompass. Well written my dear friend. Best to you in the contest.

    Mouser


  • Quiet places
    March 20, 2007

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    Creative

    Discriptive write with all the goodies to make it interesting and enjoyable to read and ponder on. Cleverly put together also. Good luck in the contest , Don

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