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Addictive

When it's running under your veins.
When it's feeding off your pain.

Explain to me how I can't give in?
Give in to such an unforgiveable sin.

Make a mark or two of such art.
Write lyrics written from the heart.

Make a mark of intials on my skin.
Give in to another sin.

Feel the rush through my body from it's touch.
Oh dear how I need you all this much.

Feel your touch upon my skin; It's all I feel.
Make me bleed so I know that I'M STILL REAL

Kill all the pain; Make me feel empty inside.
Leave pretty purple scars so I feel ugly outside.

Help me when you can; Just don't kill me.
I'm not seeking beauty nor do I seek pity.

Make me realize that I don't need perfection.
I can confine in you, my PERFECT ADDICTION.

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  • autumns rising
    March 20, 2007

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    "
    Feel your touch upon my skin; It's all I feel.
    Make me bleed so I know that I'M STILL REAL"
    love that. kick ass. I feel the same luv. *hugs* we'll make it.


  • facelessxfacade
    March 20, 2007

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    "Kill all the pain; Make me feel empty inside.
    Leave pretty purple scars so I feel ugly outside."

    Those lines capture what it means to cut so perfectly.


  • Mr Lunar Hyde
    March 20, 2007
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    I love the last two lines. I like this. It's simple yet still conveys a complex issue. Well done.