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A 'bloddy tear' runs down my cheek

this sharp blade is being --gabbed-- into my wrist
its being slid across my arm for fun
hot oil is splashed onto my body
burning the cuts
"THIS PAIN IS JUST TO UNBEARABLE!"
just stab me and get it over with
what else will happen i think
a razor is poking at my eye ball
a 'bloddy tear' runs down my cheek
i wish all this pain could just go away
me in my room cuddled up
a slice right down my face
choking on my own blood
something i never thought could happen
my body is pushed up
i gasp for air
realizing that all this was just a dream
a bad nightmare
that i relive
over & over...
AGAIN
night by night

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  • in-the-twilight
    March 21, 2007

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    This is really really dark... but I like it a lot! Good description! Good luck to you in the contest! Rock on! xoxo Meg