I haven't felt such pain in so long.
I didn't know I could still feel.
Somehow my heart was still alive,
and now I wish it wasn't.
Please cut the vein,
and end this horrible pain.
Bleed me dry.
My only wish is to die.
Life isn't worth all this.
I was so foolish to even believe.
That I could ever find happiness,
in this rotten fruitless world.
So please cut the vein,
and end this terrible pain.
Bleed me dry.
My only wish is to die.
No tears left to cry.
I'm ready to die...
Cut the vein.
Please tell me what you think
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Reminds me of some later Hypocrisy songs.
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another song! We have our first album already, all we need is musical talent! hehehe
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DO NOT CUT THAT VEIN!
because where else would i find such cleverly written poems of despair? i loved reading this, I've been here before, i know what it's like, and i honestly can say that reading this poem, i felt a side of me i havent felt in a while. Thank you for reminding me that the dark face of life takes it's tole on many, and that many can survive long enough to tell their tale.
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Did I ever tell you howmuch I am glad your my bf? I love you
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heya, i like this alot, its really good, just wanted to say, if u ever need someone to talk to im here, i know what its like, but well done hun, i loved this. xx
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Hmm..
A very strong poem.
Straight to the point and not hard to understand. Just the way a poem should be ^.^
I like the mixture of rhyme and none rhyme you have in this.
I love the lines :
No tears left to cry.
I'm ready to die...
A great way to finnish a fantastic poem. Well done!!
Bleeding Glitter xX
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I can totally relate and I love your poems and you make me happy, I love you
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TearsofSorrow is absolutely right...this is damn good...very in your face and straight to the point which is how I like my poems! Good job
love alwayz and foreva
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damn this was damn good
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