"BROTHERS"
Brothers are supposed to stick together
I've always heard blood is thicker then water
Fuck i'd still do life for my brother
But the punk is afraid of our step father
The same man who has made his life better
The same man who pulled us all out of the gutter
But none of this shit really matters
Because my brother isn't a true rider
He'll stand in front of a jury and point his finger
Really i could look past all that
But not when i'm disrespected for some lame crap
3years in prison isn't far from enough
I cant force him to visit he say's tough
For some reason i will always remember this
Regardless my love for my brother is faultless
The things i would do for him are endless
O well everyone makes mistakes
Mine was expecting him to do something he would'nt
His was thinking i was fake
Hay he might not have been told so,does'nt remember
Brothers are supposed to stick together
For me blood is and always will be thicker then water.
Jordon i wrote this because it was a way to vent
I put myself in prison,so none of this should really matter
love you baby bro
A contest entry
- Have Fun! by KissMeGoodnight.
490 points, ended March 23, 2007, 28 entries
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Comments
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oh my god. i love. i really honestly do. im awestruck(of thats a word?) i think you would have a awesome chance for the trophy if u just added some punctation. i dont need to wish you luck
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This is a great poem good luck in the contest

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