Meandering, I seem lost, but know where I’m going
Outgoing and warm, but trapped in a shy body
Open in heart and mind, waiting to embrace each beautiful idea
Nocturnal, dreaming with my eyes open while others sleep
Lighting pathways by candlelight, I trust the future
In intuitive innocence
Twisted in the shape of a heart
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Rose petals dance to the ground
Expressive without saying a word
Velvety whispers, harmoniously floating on butterfly dreams
Effervescence bubbles beneath my calm smile
Romantic only in secret, I hide my heart beneath my sleeve
Intensely living each emotion
Each day emerging from my past
Starry eyes softly dreaming, yearning to become real
A contest entry
- It's Time We Met... [CONTEST] by Touchof1der.
404 points, ended March 22, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh, but my dear you ARE real...
I like who I have met here alot. Keep writing.
Buddy
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Hmm, maybe I was metaphorically meaning become real in the sense of actualizing my dreams and living out my true self. I'm not sure at the moment because I'm unable to sleep yet exhausted
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oh, wow...this is so beautiful...and you don't come off as shy at all...very open and honest and flowing....
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Beautiful Write
a wonderful write,filled with such harmonious beauty.A picture is worth a million,but a vision is priceless.I believe you my dear are a vision within your own words.Love and tenderness with a little fresh watering brings you into a new reality.Life will get better and you will bloom into perfection.
Blessings
~Cheryl~
P.S. Good Luck in your contest
and let the
s shine bright in your eyes.
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Well Moonlit-Reveries, it is certainly nice to meet you and I do believe that just for the moment you have shed a little bit of that shyness as you opened up about yourself and shared what lies within. You did a wonderful job here. Thank you for taking the time and making the effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
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So very well done and thought out, I loved the thought process in it, not easy when you pen yourself. Nice flow and good luck Love, C
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