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Body goes where the mind reaches

If my body could reach
Where my mind dares to go
Perhaps all my problems
Would follow and go
And nothing would be left
But my body reaching for the depths of my soul
And my body no longer bereft
Of the sanity which it persues

If where my mind goes
My body would dare to follow
The inside of my heart
would not feel so hollow
for an empty cloud of doubt becomes me
and though I wish it gone
It's cure I can not see

If my body could reach
Where my mind dares to fly
then perhaps all my problems
Would wither and die

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  • SweetNSinister
    March 20, 2007
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    wow this was really good..lovely words! It was amazing!

    Sweet


  • The Squeeze
    March 20, 2007
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    Maybe sockie, maybe. Luv the Poem, its words aptly chosen and its tale so sad .