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Seaside Rendezvous



Darling I will keep the fires burning
embers glowing with a constant light
fueled by this one mans eternal yearning
for the love that haunts my soul each lonely night

Constant as the stars I am awaiting
there beside the waters will I be
with the purest heart anticipating
one more time to hold you close to me

In my mind you walk beside the ocean
bare feet in the white and shifting sands
promising forever your devotion
as you reach for me with trembling hands

If you were a dream, do not awaken
let me now and ever dwell in sleep
reality will gladly be forsaken
for one more seaside rendezvous to keep


Rakerman

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  • Samantha Marie
    September 23, 2008
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    awh this is really sweet
    thanks for entering and good luck~!


  • Pandorea
    April 26, 2008

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    aaww...this is really sweet. the last stanza is really good...i really got the sense of how great this love is.

    thanks for entering.


  • SandraMVeinot
    April 12, 2007
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    Lovely...

    A very beautiful write,
    as you always do....
    as always;
    Sandra