Mother of a beautiful baby girl named Justine
In pursuit of finding my place in this crazy world
Developing of sense of whom and what I truly am
Needing to find the footing that I have lost
Intriguing to those who try to follow my thought process
Getting tossed around in an emotionally abusive relationship
Hoping to provide a stable mother for my daughter
Trying to heed the advice of a very wise woman
Looking for the things that I once enjoyed
Aching to become a better mother and daughter
Catty when pushed past my boundaries
Enjoying these first precious months of my daughter’s life
A contest entry
- It's Time We Met... [CONTEST] by Touchof1der.
404 points, ended March 22, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow
it is extremelys ad when a beautiful younfg woman enters into a relationship with a man and well thus you have a beautiful son or daughter or both and well then you have to endure the abusive e-motional aspect of it. I just don't understand what occurs in people who do that. I am grateful that you were not physically harmed and that you are raising yuor daughter to the best of your ability
any ways a verty compelling good poem and keep it up 
Signed, Paul Congrats on Bronze
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A wonderful write..It takes alot of courage to say thing as they are...to expose yourself completely ..
An excellent write..
Peace
~A~
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I get a sense that this is very honest and true when I read it. Its deeply tied into your emotion and things going on in your life. That in my opinion is what poetry is all about. Very well done.
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Wonderful acrostic
It is so great to meet you this way - through your writing. Congratulations on a well-earned trophy. I look forward to getting to know you through your poetry. Love and hugs - joanne
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i would like to congratulate you on the bronze in this contest. viyanna rosemarie
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You are an amazing writter, breath taking mother, with a heart of an angel. I do not think there is anything more special that what you have written. It reallt speaks of the heart and soul.
It has been awhile since we talked or I read your poetry, and from what I have read here I have missed out on alot. I hope to find the time to go through your pages and read more.
I know you will do very well in the contest. -
There is such a raw honesty about this as if you took a long look into the mirror of your soul and let the words spill out of your chest onto the keyboard. I think you possess more determination and strength than you have yet tapped into. Stay focused on the things that add sunshine and abundant life to your life and you will do well. Thank you for taking the time and making the effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
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This one has a different tone to it. Only thought on this is that it kind of jumps around unevenly in subject but the matter that's there is strong and effective and very personal. Sometimes things don't go the way we expect them to and it's almost always a surprise. Facing that that's what's happened can be the hardest of all. Very nice here Miss Smooch.
Love ya again,
Daddy
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....wow....such bold-faced honesty...not often found in today's society...thank you very much for sharing, and I wish you luck with your daughter
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very nice to meet you. your honesty in this write is to be applauded. thank you for sharing this with me and i wish you the best of luck in the contest we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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