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Why get stoned

Why be in a world that every one in it thinks that you are a piece of crap?
Why live everyday in the way I love you?
I huff on the sweet smell and I am drifted away on the thought that I could save myself.
The windows of the world open to my voice.
I sing and my parents hear and I dont care.
I huff again but it happens too suddenly.
A knife is held at my throat and I scream.
the life of another is taken and I feel fine.
Why get stoned when the world is at mmy feet?
Why take a chance of sex and ruin myself?
Because I dont care and neither do my parents.
I hope their love will save me from my suicidal brigade.
I wish, If I have ever done so, that my parents would love me and care for me like a 2 year old again


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  • Christa Steiner
    March 23, 2007

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    to all of you who dont get it, the girl is like 16 and the only time she was loved is when she was around age three.
    thnx
    Rose

  • isy bowman
    March 21, 2007
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    hmmmm

    honestly, I didn't really understand it..


  • Nuclear
    March 21, 2007
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    ...I don't get it.
    You are a stoner and want to be treated like a two-year-old?

  • forgotten souls
    March 20, 2007
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    this is pretty good


  • Hinata-is-me
    March 19, 2007
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    awesomest story or poem ever besides chained

    i think you r poem or story is the best one well the 2nd best chained is the first best

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