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Shot in the Breast

Shot in the breast
and I know my heart must die
shot in the breast
by an arrow of wasted love
shot in the breast
I know I must live on
but my heart withers within me
shot in the breast
I must avenge this wrong
shot in the breast
where to begin?
Come sit down beside me
and hear my sad story
before I move on,
as I must, my heart is dead.

So beat the drum slowly
and play the fife lowly
and weep bitter tears as you bear me along
for soon the tide comes
and along with it, the drums
war follows in my wake, and I know 'tis wrong
but my heart still is dead
for I'm shot in the breast
and somebody has to pay hell
shot in the breast
I'll end it here and now

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Inspired darkly by 'Streets of Laredo'...???

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  • Siby Anan
    August 22, 2007
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    Wow...that's really...wow...


  • Artemis Gem
    March 20, 2007
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    ...interesting.

    • Chibi-chan
      March 20, 2007
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      hey, it's Siena.

      • Artemis Gem
        March 20, 2007
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        i knew it.


        • Chibi-chan
          March 20, 2007
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          of course. Who else is this dark and romantically mysterious?

          Siena: *cough cough* I'm cool like that.

          Sasuke: Shut up. I'm cooler. All the chicks love me *points to fangirls*

          Siena: Well, you're not unbeatable, so there. Nyah. *sticks out tongue at Sasuke*

          Sasuke: What are you talking about?

          Siena: *walks away serenely to do Siena things*

          Sasuke: HEY!! *held back by squealing fangirls*


          • Artemis Gem
            March 20, 2007
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            exactly!

            megumi: *nods* siena sensei's like that
            aya: wait-she's my sensei! not yours!
            megumi: I call everyone sensei!
            aya: well, *pouts* sasuke, where'd you get all the fangirls?
            Sasuke: *drowns in fangirl attack* HELP---MEE!!!
            aya: *blasts away fangirls* there, nii san~!
            siean: *comes back from...siena um things...bringing dairy products!!! chocolate milk mustache!!!*
            megumi: *chuckles at siena's milk mustache* Siena sensei-I think- theres
            Siena; ?
            Megumi: YOU HAVE A MILK MUSTACHE!! AHAH! *rotf*
            Siena: ...do I look cool?
            Sasuke; NO YOU DO NOT SO GET IT OFF!!!!!


            • Chibi-chan
              March 20, 2007
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              Siena: Fine. I'm going to eat more dairy so I look cool. *stalks away*

              Aya: Wait, Siena-sensei! I go to eat dairy products, too!!

              Megumi: ???

              Aya: *smears CALORIECRAP all over her face* YES!! Now I am cool, too!!

              Siena: ...

              Sasuke: No, you're not, Aya. That's just dumb.

              Aya: *punches Sasuke* I'M COOL!!!

              Siena: I'm gonna find a seat for this Uchiha fight. *settles down with bovine goodnesses*

              *Sasuke and Aya degenerate into a fight while Megumi watches goggle-eyed*


              • Artemis Gem
                March 20, 2007
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                tenten: FIGHT! FIGHT!
                Neji: ...do you honestly care?
                tenten: Shut up, dear.
                Neji:....
                Aya: *throws organic milk at sasuke's head*
                Sasuke: *throws anvil at aya*
                Siena: *chews on big hunk of cheese while watching
                Megumi: ....UH>>>>>>>>>
                Shino: Must you always look so pathetically stupid?
                Megumi :RAWR!

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