Nothing I could say says it right,
Only 'beyond perfect' but even that falls short
Words can't describe how amazing this is
Or come close to explaining how much I love you, how I wish you could
Read my mind so you'd know just how amazing you are, I've
Discovered that in your arms words fade away, proving that
Sometimes silence says it best
A contest entry
- How Do I Tell Him???? by Paulies Cracker.
415 points, ended April 28, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know what you think...
Comments
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oh my gosh... this was soooo good!! thank you soooo much for entering!! i really enjoyed reading this and wish you the best of luck!! once again thank you!!
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okay, apparently when i tried to submit both poems it took this one and not the other, so the other poem I thought you might like is called AMAZED... thanks for the comments, i'm glad you like this one...
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Nothing I could say says it right,
Only 'beyond perfect' but even that falls short
Words can't describe how amazing this is
Or come close to explaining how much I love you, how I wish you could
Read my mind so you'd know just how amazing you are, I've
Discovered that in your arms words fade away, proving that
Sometimes silence says it best
this is an awesome acrostic of the words 'no words'. the image behind it is very beautiful - true, strong love is something everyone dreams of. also the idea that sometimes silence says it best...
well done.
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