~*~
Artwork
blown into place
with Gods' mighty nostrils,
springtime hues blanket a canvas
which only a Creator could prepare,
carpets of velvet fields rolling,
as majestic flowers
accent my Lords'
artwork
~*~
Author notes
Rictameter
syllable count is:
2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2
A Rictameter must begin and end
with the same two syllable word/s
A contest entry
- RICTAMETERS!!!!!!!! by sunny day.
1750 points, ended March 20, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Such a beautiful poem. God created beautiful nature and we should enjoy the beauty of the nature.
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I want to go wherever that picture was taken. It's absolutely beautiful. My favorite line was most definitely "carpets of velvet fields rolling,". Perfect image to go with the picture. >pixxie<
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beautiful, and i mean the words and the picture 
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Thank you my Honey B ~
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Thank you for the wonderful entry.
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Oh my dear Uncle Bear,
This is breath taking, and sooooooo Beautiful!!! The picture enhances the write, and the background enchaces both sooo perfectly!!! I love this one! Definately one of my favorites!!!Best of luck in the contest! Keep that pen flowing my dear uncle.
Big Bear Hugs for you
Love ya,
Nyetta
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My Dear Niece ~
Thank you my little Sunshine Girl for such a lovely review...it is so nice to see you around as busy as you stay ~
Uncle Bear loves ya!
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Wow Bear this is so wonderful and the background really does your words justice.Excellent as always my friend.. Hope you are well...love mal...
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Mal ~
I am good, and I hope this finds you well also ~
It's nice to see you again....as you know how distracted and caught up we can get, so I apologize for not being over your way more often ~
I hope this finds you well ~
Bear ~
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ooooooooooh
how lovely this is, truly it is the most beautiful art work created by his hand, And then by you with your words well done,
great imagery.
warm thoughts
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My Dear Tearz ~
It is always comforting to see you my Friend ~
I haven't been on much lately, therefore I must get over to your side of AP and see what you have written as of late....I'm sure I will be pleased as always....Be patient with me though....I am still trying to focus on these new meds and most of the time I forget what I was doing
Thank you for taking the time to stop by and review this poem ~
Be well & God bless always....
Bear ~
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Eloquently Beautiful Words
and you imprisoned the beauty of this picture with such wonderful words. You are just magnificent! I love the style of poetry you choose also. Excellent job..............novy
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novy ~
You are most kind in your review ~
Thank you so much for the applauses and your time to comment on this piece ~
I wish you well this evening....
Bear ~
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What beautiful imagery you have provided here...and yes, it is all gods canvas...tis what I think everytime I go up to Sedona...awesome! Beautiful rictameter....could envision all this and more and almost smell the flowers...Great job! Good luck!
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Whoochi ~
Yes....tis Gods' canvas for sure ~
Thank you for sharing your Faith and belief with me ~
....and I LOVE Sedona!!
Thank you for the review and the best wishes as well as the applauses.....SMILE!
May God bless you always,
Bear ~
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The poem and the picture were both beautiful. There is one misspelling "Majestic". Thank you for entering this contest
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My dear brother, this is just sooo beautiful! Sigh...
Awesomely and wonderfully written! Loved it! All the best to you! -
I Liked This!
Reminds me of one of my own... but that's not why I liked it.
Good form haven't tried it- good topic, too.
Nice write all around!
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Beautiful Bear
Such beautiful praise and such lovely form. Well written and expressed. Gret Job.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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Valerie ~
Such comfort always in your reviews....thank you for that ~
May God enrich your Life as he has mine with all my dear Friends I have met here on AP ~
Thank you for taking the time to review my work, when I hardly ever get over to your page to see your latest work ~
Time is very scarce lately and I am trying to catch up on reviewing everyones work who reviews my own.....but I never seem to catch up.....I think you know what I mean
Anyhoos, thanks again....
Bear ~
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Lovely rictameter. I am always impressed with your ability to move so fluidly within a form. You bring the image so nicely alive that one forgets any limitations of the structure and uses the structure instead to provide a place to stand and look out from.Excellent.
Love, Tom B.
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beautiful, the words, the flow and the picture. It's a really peaceful write! I really enjoyed it!
Michelle
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My Queen ~
Michelle ~
Thank you so much for the review ~
Your presence is most welcomed and it makes me smile ~
Your Friend,
Bear ~
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wow what beautiful words to go with the beautiful picture! This was o masterfully penned! Great job! keep up good work
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Sean ~
Thank you for taking the time to review this piece ~
I shall hop over to your page as soon as I comment on all my IM's........therapy today, so a bit tired....so if I don't get over this evening, I will soon......or.....you can send me a link of one of your latest poems......this way, I won't miss the opportunity to read one of your latest pieces of penned Art ~
You are most kind ~
Bear ~
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Holy Moly-
Beautiful Creation You have presented on this canvas
This looks like an anonymous contest so I won't mention Your name
but heck~ I know Your signature anywhere
That quill just floats and sends Love with Light
Powerful words spoken from the Heart
Love it!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~ (Sissy)
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My Dear Sissy Desire ~
You are so kind to me when it comes to reviewing my work ~
I don't see how you find the time to review with everything you do
Thank you for the best wishes and blessings & the applauses.....and especially....for being YOU!
Brother Bear loves you very much and smiles everytime I see your name ~
May you be blessed for all the goodness you possess and share with others....
...always....
brother Bear ~
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What lovely artwork God produces and that you showed with the imagery of your words. This was a wonderful rictameter you did here. Thank you for entering and best wishes for you in my contest. Love and God bless, Joyce
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Joyce ~
First off, thank you for this contest....it gave me the opportunity to share my Faith and write about it in one of my Fav. forms ~
Next, sorry I didn't reply to your review earlier on this page....studying and classes have taken my time away for now, but I wanted to let you know I appreciated your review and suggestion with the apostrophy, other than thru the IM I sent you ~
I hope you have a blast judging, as I can see you now have your hands full with so many entries ~
Once again, thank you and God bless...
...always...
Bear ~
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