What haste
How to begin
My hurried muse is gone
My written words solemnly drawn
To the hidden beauty that dwells within
A wind tossed crimson autumn dawn
The whispered winter song
Then spring again
What haste
Author notes
I am quite pleased with this one as well. Got rid of my writes block it did ^^
It is a rictameter(SP) and I made it ryyme as such A,B,C,C,B,C,C,B,A
I am a sucker for form in ALL my poetry. I LOVE THIS!!!
A contest entry
- RICTAMETERS!!!!!!!! by sunny day.
1750 points, ended March 20, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a good form piece, i have not written one of these in ages i might later. aye words capture the hidden beauty of us all and the darker sides.
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A very lovely poem such beautiful words you used paint a picture inmy mind as I read it, very nicely written.
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This is very beautiful and I enjoyed it alot
This is so lovely, The wind tossed crimson Autumn dawnThe whispered winter song.Nature at her best
Thanks for shareing
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A LOVING HEART
VERSE SWIMMING IN NATURE'S BEAUTY.
SEASONS ARE NOT WITHOUT SOME VALID REASONS
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Very nice flow. My sister Joyya also enjoys writes of this nature. You might like to check out her site. I write, but my sister has the talent. I enjoyed your poem as much as I do my sisters Keep penning.
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wonderfully expressed
Great write well enjoyed (Lisa0
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we all love this poem.
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This was a great peice and really well written. You did a wonderful job with it. It reached out and grabbed its reader and drew one in immediately.
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This is great. You have done so well here on this. And I love what you have written about and the ending was wonderful. Topped it off so well.
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good
I liked the way that it flowed. This is my fav line A wind tossed crimson autumn dawn I like the immage that it paints in my mind.
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I actually don't think I am even a bit qualified to review a rictameter as I have percisely zero experience with them. Soooo keeping that in mind, I thought that this was a soothing read, if not just a little bit hard to follow.
Best wishes in your future endevors.
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This is a lovely piece. I'm glad your writer's block is gone and that this is the result. Thank you for entering this contest
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No problem, I am glad you enjoyed reading it ^^
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We rush through life in this hectic world. Reading poetry is a lovely way to stop and smell the roses. Thank you for entering and for the lovely imagery. Best wishes for you in my contest. Love and God bless, Joyce
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Yes indeed, and such was te message being conveyed, this is the first Poem of this kind I have ever written and I was extremely pleased with it, which Is quite odd for me, I never like much of my poetry (all the stuff on AP I like, but I have A few 5 subject notebooks full of poetry I just can't bring myself to throw away)
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