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AngieMarie

Always dreaming of better days
never stopping her crazy ways
gives and gives and seldom recieves
intentially constant attention she seeks
everything in it's place at all times
Makes her day better with silly little rhymes
angelic in nature some may consider
radiantly shining in one way or another
irrational, yet she has her positives too
emotionally clinging, looking for love that's true.

Author notes

For some reason I made it ryhme..lol.. oh well.. I like it.

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  • Moonlit-Reveries
    March 21, 2007

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    Excellent flow here. This is a very good acrostic. I especially like the third line from the end and can especially relate to that personally.


  • sheeprus
    March 21, 2007

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    WOW

    Making it rhyme. I have a hard enough time making short poems ryhme, nevermind poems where I am confined to certain letters! Great job@


  • Touchof1der silver member
    March 20, 2007

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    What a great flow you have going here! A rhyming acrostic. How in the world did you pull that off? It's nice to meet you AngieMarie. You have a lot of good qualities to be admired and strengthened. Thank you for taking the time and effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Whyitt U
    March 20, 2007
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    AngieMarie I love it!!

    Wyatt*heart* xoxox


  • Jeff.W
    March 19, 2007

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    so thats the real you put into a poem, not bad.You're better at this thing than I am.I really understand the part about giving and not recieving.I do that alot.Most of the time I don't expect to get anything back in return.My sister is always seeking attention from others,but your both girls so its understandable.Good luck in the contest


  • XChrisUnknownX
    March 19, 2007

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    Wow....

    =] Attention, judging by the way you write and present feelings is very much deserved. Being the type of guy that I am, I relate to that final line... I suppose maybe that's considered a fault or a flaw to most people- Being clingy. People were giving me looks and yelling at me to get over my first relationship- It was- at that moment impossible for me to understand how 'clung' I was to memories of what I'd experienced- and impossible for the world to understand exactly what my version of true love was...and...still is. Well, keep on giving, Eventually somebody gives back in the most genuine manner in existence, or so I'd like to think.

  • poet43
    March 19, 2007

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    and, i like it too

    AM, i like the whimsy and fun in it. You stir some good stuff in me.

    I wish for you the best of all
    In summer, spring, winter and fall
    Go find your love of all the seasons
    Go find him there for all those reasons

    poet

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