Watch the flame climb,
Look at the way it dances.
Listen to the snap and crackle,
As the wood burns and falls.
Fire is your life and your friend.
Author notes
Kinda Erie huh?
A contest entry
- ... In 5lines or in 30 words ... by CianLOVES.
375 points, ended March 21, 2007, 13 entries
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very eerie! but i loved the imagery, and could actually imagine flames licking up towards the sun!
luv always dani -
this is a great poem its not eerie its perfect for pyros. awesome job my friend.
patty -
i love fires! no im not a pyro lol..i could just watch them for hours and i get mezmorized lol. great write!
MINDIE -
uh ah!
fire is NOT my friend! I really liked this Will good job!
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maybe erie but its good i liked it
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a bit
reminds me of campfires.....right after everyone goes to sleep....and you're the only one left outside the tents.
memories slowly churn behind the reflection of your eyes.
i like it
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