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Calm Tranquility(Dodoitsu)

Solace within spoken words

while inspiration foresees

life as another mirror

upon this one soul

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Dodoitsu:
A fixed folk song form of Jampenese origin and is often about love or humor. It has 26 syllables made up of four lines of 7.7.7.5 syllables respectively. It is unrhymed and none-metrical

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  • bethan-gaze
    March 20, 2007

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    I love this form and you have captured something beautiful here - this is exceptional and the picture sets it all off beautifully. Hearty congrats on the bronze trophy!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 20, 2007
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    i have seen that picture berfore but on the poem i loved it, it brought this strange kind of calm to me, i think you were robbed in this contest or the other ppl did a on point job, cause i can't see this at bronze, keep it flowing and still congrads on the contest


  • Samplette gold member
    March 19, 2007

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    Profound and spiritual. Excellent write. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering the contest, great job.
    Sam