Solace within spoken words
while inspiration foresees
life as another mirror
upon this one soul
Author notes
Dodoitsu:
A fixed folk song form of Jampenese origin and is often about love or humor. It has 26 syllables made up of four lines of 7.7.7.5 syllables respectively. It is unrhymed and none-metrical
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A contest entry
- Short Lived Short Form #5 by Samplette.
300 points, ended March 19, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this form and you have captured something beautiful here - this is exceptional and the picture sets it all off beautifully. Hearty congrats on the bronze trophy!
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i have seen that picture berfore but on the poem i loved it, it brought this strange kind of calm to me, i think you were robbed in this contest or the other ppl did a on point job, cause i can't see this at bronze, keep it flowing and still congrads on the contest
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Profound and spiritual. Excellent write. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering the contest, great job.
Sam
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