Still, even after all this time it
Hurts to know that no one cares
About me and how i feel.I'm stuck
Doomed to walk this empty life alone.
Overboard. into the thrashing waves of loneliness my soul is cast
Warfare,I'm battling not to sink too far into the darkness.
Violated, brokenly i cave in to the inevitable
At last!I've almost hit the bottom not much further, just one more step.
Leap. throw yourself into the air feel the rush as the ground comes up to met you
Expel that last breathe,your as good as dead anyway.
A contest entry
- It's Time We Met... [CONTEST] by Touchof1der.
404 points, ended March 22, 2007, 19 entries
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very thought provoking. nice write twin. gr8 emotion and good language. i hope your doing alright and you won't be doomed to walk alone, what are friends for if not to keep you company?
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I'm sorry to read that you harbor such thoughts in regards to yourself. Life should be a celebratory thing because in today's society we can be and do so many things that those who lived before us did not have the choice let alone the opportunity to enjoy. It's nice to meet you Shadowvale. I appreciate your honesty. I did note that in the next to the last line you have FELL instead of FEEL... a minor typo.
Thank you for taking the time and making the effort to enter my contest. Good luck! 
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thank you for pointing that out good luck with your contest.
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May come across as cheesy, but it sounds like you're trapped in a self-created life. Only YOU can change it. Others will love you once you love yourself.
Sorry if I sound preachy.. It's just brining up a lot of thought.
"Warfare,I'm battling not to sink too far into the darkness."
-- Well put.
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